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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
It would be amazing, you and I Nothing else exists but Earth and sky A special bond that we shall make To heal each, the other’s ache Sometimes only a voice is needed Hearing so as not to go unheeded Or sometimes breathing is the only sound Nothing else matters as no one else is around It could and should be amazing, you and I The need deep inside you do not deny In this flame you call life, you’re all I see Give in to the heat as you burn in me |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wow! Voices carry beyond time and space... Very passionate expression. TD |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whew! Spontaneous combustion, this!  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yep, I'm having to guess that would be....amazing  wow, another awesome write from you, now if I could just figure out where my muse has run off to this time...  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sigh, ahhh that last line was amazing...beautifully written and expressed...Good morning sir...wishing you a wonderful day ahead! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Once again your words represent the epitome of love and romance. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The heat that never burns....but can weld like molten steel. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hearing so as not to go unheeded Or sometimes breathing is the only sound Nothing else matters as no one else is around yes, I loved like this once and it was amazing, and hope to someday find the man whom I can not only give that love to, but also receive the fruits of his adoration and kindness. Lovely write my friend. |
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