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something I should have said
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something I should have said |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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listening to her was like sifting through spam every disconnected thought came crashing through her skull into her mouth spilling out all over the planet in a heap when it seemed she was running low she would open her yap pour in a chug of Cab and it would metabolize almost immediately into yet more unabsorbed junk speak before she had been brooding and stoic but now she was borderless and stupid this is of course an indictment not of her but me if I cannot listen then what am I? smarmy smiles and nods? and I am even less interested in myself |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know how I love when you write about people |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You been poking around in my head again, picking up my exact thoughts, that I should have had the sense to write poems about???? Good on ya! Somebody ought to! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Rebel -- you're a tender soul and contemplative. This was a great write. I'm kind of like the girl you describe -- some insight for you....I do that when I feel uncomfortable and want the other person to feel comfortable enough to talk -- think if I make a fool of myself, maybe they'll feel safe enough to expose a little more.....see, I told you I was like her...lol Enjoyed your soul searching. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i can relate, but i think my yapping is getting out emotions,seeking understanding, and bearing my soul, and to let another know it's safe to let their heart speak,letting their soul search without fear. and its ok to shed a tear |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
*faints* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sometimes Reb, you get right down into the marrow. Does silence on your part make the noise go away, or does the frequency/volume increase? Just curious. I've played both sides of this scene. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Oy, been there, it isn't easy not to scream for help when someone is running on,,and on,,,and on,,,,usually repeating thins, not making sense, and just plain boring you to the point that you don't even care if you are alive anymore, lol Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
making conversation sucks; i say skip it, head to the sack and find out if it's real or not over there |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LR A lot of truth in this....refreshing and unique, like you!  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
this is of course an indictment not of her but me if I cannot listen then what am I? smarmy smiles and nods? and I am even less interested in myself I considered a cutesy response... but even my motor mouth can't manage anything but applause for this one, my friend. *S* Of course... I can always ADD that you're not totally without charm... right???? LOL smooches!!! Ever the Auntie *S* |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
always enjoy your portraits LR |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
NOW you know... why I keep my mouth shut.  Super hugs, m'friend. |
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