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Between us |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
You bring out the wild abandon in me Of insatiate appetites The calm of eventides And the breath that is life in between I can stand your flaming heat no more In languid puddle melt Only this desire felt Between our mouths a silent implore Longing for the intimate in thrills That exist for you In everything I do Just as your muted silence kills Between us, our voices make the breath Of fire that must be fed Heat proves what is not dead Alive, only time itself shall know death |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
PK...a very, very good penning... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow..... this is fantastic... it's great to read you again  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Absolutely breath taking write my friend. Hugs, TD |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Thank you all for reading and your replies encourage me. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
The calm of eventides And the breath that is life in between tremendous write! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and that's what I'm afraid of with my "situation" good write here |
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