Open Poetry #32 |
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To Court |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
Whisper three small words ~ Courting a love by promise ~ Repeat, “I do, too…” |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Karilea, I love the multiple meanings here. Brevity is so difficult to do well. You do it well, friend! Corinne |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I do, too Can one wish for more? You have caught the very essence. Wonderful! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Perfect TD |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
And that loving phrase May also be echoed by And I you, my love Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lovely Karilea ![]() ![]() What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
I feel it takes a special person to write a good haiku. 17 sylables to complete the meaning! yet here for the third time tonight I am totally impressed. Nice job and include me in "I do, too!". creative write. pictureme :-) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*big smile* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
..........yes. ![]()
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh wow...!!!! Eric |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
What else might be said....perhaps "and I will"... excellent thought. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ah, yes, very well said... |
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