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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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MARTIE Her heartstrings are a soft euphoric lute That play the light, sweet melodies of time Her fingers sweep like feather wings across The breadth of scales that are her spirit’s chime And she can pluck the pleasure strings of youth That strum a portrait of her glistening days And brush her wing in dainty strokes beyond The depth of thought that cradles her malaise For not a golden chord remains untouched Unfelt by blissful fingers in the cold She does not shun the sun nor hide in dark The music that is hers, the naked soul Her truth is what is pleasantly unfurled In pureness of her femininity Her arms stretch out to harp’s most distant string And strike its highest chord in ecstasy Then pacing fingers to the deepest tone She strikes them all, not setting one apart So delicate the melodies that flow From this, the lyric contents of her heart I cannot see the world from where she sits Nor play with fragile grace what is, what was For there is not another who could pluck The golden strings of life the way she does Elizabeth Santos April 27, 2004 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lovely poem for a graceful poet...hmmm that is if it is for our Martie...  M |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Elizabeth This poem is a delight to read, lovely, how its lyrics fall from the lips. "For not a golden chord remains untouched Unfelt by blissful fingers in the cold She does not shun the sun nor hide in dark The music that is hers, the naked soul" You could not have said this better... Lovely, lovely, lovely.....poem, poet, subject - - - - - - ice ><> |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"For there is not another who could pluck The golden strings of life the way she does" Elizabeth you sure have that right......This is very nice and I know she will love it! Eric |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now where are the pictures? Smiling on ALL of you! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Liz, this was beautiful in it's entirety. The flow, the cadence, the rhyme ... perfection as always, my friend.  You've captured the essence of Martie through a melody of words only you can perform. The warmth and depth in this piece portrayed not only a wonderful symphony of words, but a true friendship. Just lovely.  Best wishes and hugs to you both, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When she told me she was going for a visit...I said I cant wait to see the poetry!! What a loving, sweet, tribute you have penned Liz. I'm sure you inspired each other in many ways, and we will get to enjoy the end results. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a beautiful, loving tribute from and to, two tremendous poets...this was beautiful Liz... especially Then pacing fingers to the deepest tone She strikes them all, not setting one apart So delicate the melodies that flow From this, the lyric contents of her heart she will be overwhelmed and suprised. Love to you both...Lee J. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This is so true.... Such a loving tribute to one who is the best of us in so many ways...thank you for giving us this, and I for one am keeping it where it belongs -- in my library. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When one wonderful poet pays homage to another, I expect excellence. *S* And I found it here... how beautiful!!! *S* |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Elizabeth, What a wonderful tribute to Martie! Corinne |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Wonderful! You know that I'd been meaning for ages to write a poem about Martie but I never felt I was quite up to the task, and I'd been so far gone from piptalk lately that it's not something I've wanted to attempt--- I can understand where your inspiration comes from, she's a fantastic poet and her perspective is incredible. I think you've captured her craft beautifully... Brian |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful tribute for Martie and so deeply deserved indeed. Love, Margherita |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I truly wish I could have been there Liz! So close, but yet so very far. This is a wonderful write for our dear Martie. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Elizabeth, such a beautiful tribute to Martie you have penned. Maree What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and grace describes grace... 'tis a beautiful thing you've done here, Liz. Brava. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz...my dear friend...I thought that I had smiled and cried all I could...but you brought both again with this wonderful poem. I think the poem is more you then me...such a lovely person you are. I love you! Thank you for everything! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Liz - You've got me dancing to Martie's music... So what's new, eh??... Loveya, sweet lady... YOU TOO MARTIE... and DENISE...   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful poem for a beautiful poetess by a beautiful writer. So lovely Liz...I'm please you all could get together. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"So delicate the melodies that flow From this, the lyric contents of her heart" I think this is true for both of you. This is a beautiful tribute. Thank you for sharing it, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Who else could have written such a lovely tribute to our Martie but you, dear Liz. When I see you all in the picture Nan posted, I remember those wonderful days I spend at your place two years ago and I get a little homesick. I hope, one day, to see you all again. Big hugs to you my friend, for this beautiful gift you gave us. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
amazing poem and thread! It's a keeper! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I can't express the love that I feel for you. Elizabeth you have written Martie as the pure melody that she is. Like a fantastic piece of music, she is more appreciated with each reading, hmmm, very similar to that Santos woman Thanks for the call - I miss you all. Today I'm only moving clouds, tomorrow I'll try mountains. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LovelyLizzyLady~ These are the most beautemous thoughts from one special poetess friend to another~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, this is so beautiful. I know that you all enjoyed your visit so much. I'm glad that ya'll were able to get together. It had to be special with you all there. Hugs to you all, Ethel |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A melodious masterpiece that describes Martie PERFECTLY, Elizabeth!! Very well done!! Thanks for the memories, girls! Let's do it again! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Martie, there is so much more to you than could ever be written in a poem. You and Nan and Denise have proven once again the power of friendship, friendship that was born on the blue pages of poetry. PS I am simply quafed at all of the gracious remarks to this poem. Thank you dear friends If you are not familiar with the word "quaf", perhaps Martie could enlighten you. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz........ROFLOL and  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Still admiring those dandelions, eh Martie?! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
beautiful poetry by a beautiful poet about a beautiful person - you did this so well - Paul |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I forgot the library thingy |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
and again.....  |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, I envy you all so much, recalling how wonderful past get-togethers have been. Martie, I would have been proud to meet you - Liz, I'm proud I did!!  |
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