Open Poetry #32 |
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some new tanka poems |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
HAiku and tanka are really what I was known for here -here are a few new tanka poems.... 1) Addicted I wake at daybreak desperate with longing; there's no antidote for this need to be with you- your touch is my addiction. 2) Beacon Watching the shimmer of early evening stars I realize again I am meant for your beacon in this dark and lonely world. 3) your voice on the wind whispers just behind my ear shivers down my spine pleasure-pools across my hips leaves me begging for more.... 4) winter surrenders as spring stretches her arms to embrace the sun but I still long for summer and your touch on my bare skin. [This message has been edited by Beki (04-27-2004 03:08 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beki -- all lovely -- #5's my favorite! ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like 5 best too |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
oops -forgot to change that to #4 fixed now ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice..each of them *s M |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Although all 4 were good, I enjoyed the 1st one the best. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Please delet this duplicate post. Thank you. [This message has been edited by Opeth (04-27-2004 08:29 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Beki Enjoyed, my fav is #1. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
and theyre all very nice Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beki they are all lovely, but I did enjoy number four the most as well. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Well done. I most enjoyed #3 INclan |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
All great, number one being the best.....how ya been Beki? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wow...had a hard time picking a favorite.. But, I have to say #3. ![]() "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful all of them. Favorite is number one! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
WOW SUCH A NICE RESPONSE THANKS EVERYONE FOR READING -IT IS GREAT TO BE BACK AT PASSIONS ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beki, all were equally good to me, and as I have read you here and there over the internet, I must say it is nice to see you here so I don't have to find you. ![]() Wonder if you could fix the link to your website sure would like to go read there? Thanks. Today I'm only moving clouds, tomorrow I'll try mountains. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
sorry my friend who hosted my website shut it down i only recently found out but you can find my stuff at haikuhut.com, I have a page there....and am working on setting up another website as we speak....it is nice toknow you want to find me ![]() |
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