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A Flow of Blood
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A Flow of Blood |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A Flow of Blood Her kiss was like eating a red Washington apple. A surging flow of juice as her teeth broke through the outer skin. But then, she did tell me she was a vampire. I didn't believe her until a flow of blood began. JamesLee April24 2004 |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Red does attract me....I will change into a  and fly out the window....a.k.a..Mistress of the night... Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
James -- I enjoyed the contrast in this poem; very entertaining!  |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
YAY!! I loved this, of course I've always had a soft spot for washington apples and vampires!! hehehe.... ~Live and Laugh~ The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch...gawd! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes yes yes she is a woman of spirit James However.......what can I say... Good write! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
good one, enjoyed! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank each of you...I like a good solid kisser...James |
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