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Open Poetry #32

The Strong Power

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-04-26 03:12 PM

Love the complex emotion that
engulfs not only my heart
but my soul, my very being.

It's what makes me thrive
it's what could make me
want to give up and die.

Better to have had it once
then nothing at all.. ahh love
so pure yet bitter sweet one day
we are in love and the one day
it depletes.

within my very center of my
core as it penetrates me from within
I will forever adore love
and on going owmen of hope
and happiness in this crazy
world.

Unedited im aware of the things i need to fix lol

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-04-26 03:44 PM

*s...I use to feel this way...

M

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-04-26 03:51 PM

It certainly is a strong power and you captured that well!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-04-26 03:56 PM

Indeed love is the center of everything.
Well done!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

4 posted 2004-04-26 04:39 PM

I like it just the way it is...
j/k *S* maybe change a couple of spellings.

I like how it says a lot of truths in life.

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

5 posted 2004-04-27 12:47 PM

thanks guy's

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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