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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

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0 posted 2004-04-15 01:45 PM

Nothing ever seems to be
enough.

We are endless in the cutting sweep of
our appetite.

Hunger is the nature of
flesh -

And we are starved for union.

Perhaps this could be
enough...

To feed only of ourselves in a
holy feast of pleasure.

Or this...

To be filled in a soulful kiss of
met desire.

This...

To fast in the distance of a touch...whetting our
hunger in a slow burn towards each
other.

Yes...this.

This would be enough.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-04-15 01:55 PM

pure art!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-04-15 01:56 PM

Gawd..this is so very beautiful Eric!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2004-04-15 01:59 PM

Ericc

Yes...this.

This would be enough. !

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-04-15 02:00 PM

Nah...
not when it's this smooth...

and light, and lovely...

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-04-15 02:10 PM

WOW!!!!

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2004-04-15 02:16 PM

wonderfully penned
yessssss!!!
Hope

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

7 posted 2004-04-15 05:04 PM

You have convinced this avarice soul! lol

I like how you think! ~ and write!

EA

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2004-04-15 05:49 PM

this was beautifull i really enjoyed reading this one thanks :loveya"

passing shadows
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displaced

9 posted 2004-04-16 04:07 AM

I love the way you write of love

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2004-04-16 09:10 AM

lovely Ericc~

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2004-04-16 10:53 AM

loved this, so I touched the screen to feel the real of the thought

loner187
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since 2004-03-21

Posts 106
Upstate New York

12 posted 2004-04-16 11:21 AM

this is beautiful, lovely! pure magic and pleasure to read

The first step to recovery is to admit your addiction. So, here it is:

I, Amanda Barmash, am addicted to Ben Harper.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

13 posted 2004-04-16 11:23 AM

Beautiful poetry!
JL

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

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Alberta, Canada

14 posted 2004-04-16 11:24 AM

WOW!!! It is never enough when the words are so beautiful...Magnificent...

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

15 posted 2004-04-16 09:05 PM

I can never get enough of you, dear Eric.

You are beauty and wisdom, your poetry is of outstanding quality .....

*
*

One by one
I take your words
to fill my hands
with silky rose petals
of enticing fragrance

will this be enough
to meet my desire
of inhaling love
with every breath?

*
*

.... and as it is already April 17th here ...HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!
ENJOY YOUR SPECIAL DAY AND LET LOVE FLOW INTO YOUR HEART AND SAVOUR IT!

I love you. Margherita

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

16 posted 2004-04-16 10:47 PM

Ericc, here it is your birthday and you are the one giving gifts! Thanks for this wonderful piece of writing!

Sadelite
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Posts 2519

17 posted 2004-04-16 10:53 PM

This is perfection in thought and presentation. I enjoyed it very, very much and would like to catalog it for future. Thank you for sharing this gem with us.
Sade

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

18 posted 2004-04-17 06:59 AM

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU POET OF LOVE AND LIGHT!

I love you.
Margherita

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

19 posted 2004-04-17 08:19 AM

Happy Birthday, Eric!

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

20 posted 2004-04-17 09:20 AM

Yes...perhaps this indeed would be enough

Wistful lines that scroll the blue pages here.

oh, let me add my wishes for a happy birthday to the others

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

21 posted 2004-04-17 09:27 AM

Happy Birthday, Mr Poet of loving thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

22 posted 2004-04-17 02:54 PM

HEY...Happy Birthday.

This is incredible, no matter how many times you read it...hehe

TD

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

23 posted 2004-04-17 05:11 PM

We are endless in the cutting sweep of
our appetite.

Too true....Love your poetry Ericc~
Happy Birthday to you, poet Sir~

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

24 posted 2004-04-17 05:40 PM

Very, very beautiful and romantic!!
You know that I love it!!

Oh, and I hear it's your birthday....
I hope that you have a very Happy Birthday, Eric!!
Heart Hugs,
Ethel

wordwizard
Member

since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

25 posted 2004-04-17 07:53 PM

enough is not enough, is it? Good approach

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

26 posted 2004-04-17 10:18 PM

Good poetry makes me happy

Kaoru

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Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

27 posted 2004-04-19 02:47 AM

Ericc, this is amazing.. verily.

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