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Angels Wings
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Angels Wings |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Angels Wings I was not born with Angels wings Although equipped with many things Nor was I born with devils horns A rose of red with many thorns But in the movement here and there I sensed the doubtful in the wear And I became the two of none Nor could I see the pattern one There is a rod that touches all The largest large and smallest small Forgiveness is a mental stay One you learn along the way It’s on the way when comes the dawn The crystal dew of early mourn The inward slide within the hide The loss of polish and of pride It is a pattern or a grid It is the essence of the ID |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
An ode to self...I enjoyed! INclan |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
It is a pattern or a grid It is the essence of the ID great closing lines all in sync here  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There is a rod that touches all The largest large and smallest small Forgiveness is a mental stay One you learn along the way It’s on the way when comes the dawn The crystal dew of early mourn The inward slide within the hide The loss of polish and of pride ================================== I've now had my morning dose of Sy-babes humanity and humilty, wrapped in wisdom rhyme. Cant think of a better way to start the day.  There is a rod that touches all Yeppers....its called YOUR POETS PEN!!  *ww*    ... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...what JM said! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
May I echo what JM said as well? Morning hugs and tea, Nancy. To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sy?... You never cease to amaze and impress... Love this, my friend...  "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
There is a rod that touches all The largest large and smallest small your response to one of mine... always a comfort when reading your words, Sy and thanksM |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
no doubt you were born with angel wings....lovely read... ~~**~~ The way you move me I walk with your shadow With your silhouette Leave the light on It always comes Back to you ~~**~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
With the coming of early dew In dawn's light in land of Mu A poet soared on wings of dove His poems so pure and full of love. As angel sonnets fall to Earth His words are gold and of much worth He comforts, teaches, and entertains He writes of love and summer rains. Sir Sy, this angel poet's you! And heaven is your land of Mu! EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-26-2004 11:13 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I was not born with Angels wings Although equipped with many things Nor was I born with devils horns A rose of red with many thorns But in the movement here and there I sensed the doubtful in the wear And I became the two of none Nor could I see the pattern one Seymour, this is me....part angel...but part devil.LOL But, isn't everyone like that...kind of? LOL Hugs, my friend Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Elegant truth. Thanks and top of the morning to you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you just can't see your own wings till you get to heaven |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
where would this world be today, without poets and people like you!!! Lovely |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
INclan Thank you so much. inkedgoddess Thank you sweety. JM What can I say to a friend so dear Except to leave my Randy near. WWRS Sunshine The same to you as JM. LOL Nancy I just love echoes. vlraynes Love you my friend. Maureen, Greeneyes Thank you sweet. Earth Angel, You are so right. Ethel, I thought you knew. LOL iliana And a good morning to you. passing, You really think so? LeeJ, And you, hugs. |
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