tell me if my heart is still beating..

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Open Poetry #32

tell me if my heart is still beating..

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-04-25 04:52 PM

i'm so predictable
every word i speak
every word i type
so predictable

hopeless romantic.

do the stars shine like i remember?
its been so long since i've looked
so long...

put your hand on my chest
and tell me if my heart is still beating

please forgive me if i cry
i don't feel the same anymore
i feel worn and torn
used and abused

i'm not myself anymore..

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

1 posted 2004-04-25 04:54 PM

Your heart is still beating, dear. With every write u write and every breath u take, it will get stronger.
kelly

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

2 posted 2004-04-25 04:54 PM

To believe in romance is to always carry hope...so your heart must still beat!
Enjoyed this!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-04-25 04:55 PM

exhale -- yes, you're heart is still beating -- feelings we all understanding an expresed very well.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-25 04:57 PM

you and me both

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-04-25 05:06 PM

You've a great gift of expression. Thanks for sharing!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2004-04-25 07:23 PM

you breathe the pain we feel at times
then release in your words

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