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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Horizontally Bic lay waiting to be held clutched by penning thoughts |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good one |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
passing shadows, Thank you for your sweet response. Sadie |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a cool write, Sadie! It's good to establish a relationship with the BIC, it collaborates after all! Enjoyed this much. Love, Margherita  |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
What about Zebra? Clever write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite Well done my friend. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
GRIN!!! TD |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
See? Anything can turn into a poem! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Starkly white and bare, Paper awaits flow of ink In poetic form. Smiling here, Linda |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sadie, I see nothing wrong with this write. I think it's good.   |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
good one! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
hey, mighty fine! when I saw the title, I wondered if it would be about the bic pen...amazing! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Margherita, Everytime I think I have no more interest in writing, I see the pen. I wish I knew what it wanted to say. Thank you for your your response. I always learn something. Sadie dingusjr, Zebra? Never had the pleasure of stripes swinging into tale. (Gee, that was fun!) Thanks for the clever. ~ Sadie ~ Seymour, That means alot coming from a poet whose attitude and skills I so admire. ~Sadie~ TD, Grinnin' right back at ya! Thanks for taking the time to read. You're a sweetheart. ~Sadie~ Sunshine, I have always believed this, but would rather have a little more content than this,although this does suit the mood now. Thanks for stopping in. ~Sadie~ Earth Angel, "Starkly white and bare, Paper awaits flow of ink In poetic form." I enjoyed your senryu, and am sending one back. Thank you. Linda, I really enjoy our friendship here. Fingers wait occasion to ignite the stick between when mind is fired. ~Sadie~ Gary's girl, (Before I edited several times, it was written in a very provocative manner, something which I try to avoid. Sexual connotations accidently were there. I feel very uncomfortable sharing thoughts of that nature. I doctored the poem up, but still remember it the other way. It's certainly not my favorite senryu! Thanks for your comforting comment, Ethel. Sadie iliana, Thank you. I'll catch you later... Love, Lil Sis VAS, "Very fine." I like the fine tipped pen, too! Thank you for your sweet comment. Sadie [This message has been edited by Sadelite (04-25-2004 10:23 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great great great and my pen is still working - thjis is wonderful Sadie - I really liked it - Paul |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Glad you liked it, Paul. Thanks for checking it out... Sadie |
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