Open Poetry #32 |
We Don't Dance |
azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
We don’t dance you and I Not the way lovers do We don’t hold each other as the music starts And together beautifully move We won’t be a couple full of class Drawing admiring glances As we take to a low lit floor And move perfectly through several dances We won’t grow old and move in time As younger couples exclaim How they hope in years and years to come That they someday will do the same But the rhythm we share is sweeter than music As we walk through life in syncopated motion We draw those glances of admiration Simply through mutual devotion And the years to come like those that passed Will be filled with laughter and tears And always holding the others hand As we share our hopes and fears We need not choreographed steps in time To draw admiring stares We need only what we have had all along Each other’s love and care And when the years pass we’ll have no dance That someday comes to an end We instead will have eternal love And each other as a friend. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... [This message has been edited by azblond (04-25-2004 11:06 PM).] |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A sensitive, warm write. Thanks for sharing! |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Thank you! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"We won’t grow old and move in time As younger couples exclaim How they hope in years and years to come That they someday will do the same But the rhythm we share is sweeter than music As we walk through life in syncopated motion We draw those glances of admiration Simply through mutual devotion" Interesting meld of darkness and contentment. Very cool, nice to read you again... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
If you don't mind...I may write, but you said something I need someone to hear! Thank you. TD |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We won’t be a couple full of class Drawing admiring glances As we take to a low lit floor ~*~ Honesty at its best... at least you have a man that dances! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"We instead will have eternal love And each other as a friend." ~ The beauty of this makes my soul sigh... EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and that's what's important sigh |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful....much enjoyed. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Thank you all! When we first married I had hoped to talk my husband into dancing lessons, but well...I'm not sure me feet could take it, and later I realized there is more than just dancing... Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michelle~ It is SO good to see you~ This is just a beautiful piece~ 'But the rhythm we share is sweeter than music As we walk through life in syncopated motion We draw those glances of admiration Simply through mutual devotion' Oh ... how I know that mutual devotion~ Thank you for being here ...~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
you made me smile with this beautifull write kelly |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
mmm.. something smells good... what is that??? you may not dance -- but you sure can cook! very nice |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Laughing at Rebel...mmm...you are all great! Thank you for taking the time to watch us stumble across the floor! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
it sounds to me as though you do dance....this is lovely ~~**~~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
beautifully written - shared with loving passion thanks - Paul |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
you swept me away with this one; I'd hope my better half would dance, too, but what you're saying is so much more important. Enjoyed! |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
He swept me away long ago...and though there is no dancing I hope the music never stops. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What sweet devotion you pen here! Enjoyed! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"...the rhythm we share is sweeter than music..." I know this one. Beautifully put. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
beautifully spoken....the truest devotion shines here..... |
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