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swatcatpettus
Member

since 2004-04-12

Posts 57
CA

0 posted 2004-04-24 05:59 PM

A toxic moon ripped the rolling hitch knot,
A ship of sorrow and anger floated down stream,
Never stopping,
Only to realize that its life was only a bad dream

He sat in his chair,
In his cubicle,
In the giant corporate monster that consumed his soul,
His only escape he thought,
Was too great a toll

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

1 posted 2004-04-24 06:04 PM

Powerful...this is really a great piece.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2004-04-24 06:09 PM

very powerful....

~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-04-24 06:22 PM

Great Title

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

4 posted 2004-04-24 06:27 PM

A top notch write!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-04-25 02:13 PM

done well

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2004-04-25 04:37 PM

Yes, it is a very powerful write.
good writing.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-04-25 04:40 PM

Enjoyed the powerful write!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2004-04-26 10:19 AM

singing the CEO blues
well done, cat

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

9 posted 2004-05-05 07:53 PM

this one is great

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2004-05-05 08:12 PM

Excellent.

Much enjoyed.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2004-05-05 09:57 PM

Excellent write...much enjoyed!
Hugs~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

12 posted 2004-05-06 12:37 PM

Trapped. I understand. But where to find utopia? Does it even exist any more? Or did it ever? Are we be brave enough to make our own? And if so, can we? Or do the rapids of so called progress run too fast? Are we mereley swept down stream with the flow of the times? We can rage, but can we change? And if not our surroundings, then from within? Excellent write.

Susan

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2004-05-07 12:51 PM

Nice writing...James

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