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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-04-24 04:54 PM

Basket Case

I always tend
to worry about
all the wrong things
unraveling the lines
of detailed colors
in the weaves
of grey baskets
what does it
really contain
but the company
of questioning
try as I do to
resist complication
of tearing apart
flexible frail bones
tightly connected
hooked to strength
for put together
or pulled
it still just
holds me empty

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2004-04-24 05:01 PM

boy, join the crowd Slick...we just didn't know how to express it ...

Terrific write...

jimmy

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

2 posted 2004-04-24 06:10 PM

My favorite reads are quite often the ones where I see myself...add this to the list...

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2004-04-24 08:07 PM

great write!!! Paul

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2004-04-25 06:24 AM

bumpity bump bump.

amazing write, h..as always!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2004-04-25 06:57 AM

Helen, I love what you
do with words. You
are very talented.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2004-04-25 01:23 PM

still weaving baskets? They kicked me out of class, said i was too crazehhhh

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

7 posted 2004-04-25 01:26 PM

no, r , you like me are a lifetime jello eating member

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-04-25 01:32 PM

good one

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

9 posted 2004-04-25 03:03 PM

I liked.

Juju

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2004-04-25 03:04 PM

Enjoyed this one Helen!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2004-04-25 03:06 PM

"what does it
really contain
but the company
of questioning"

Great lines, Helen!

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