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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-04-23 07:12 AM

Sweeping

The reaper does not sweep for me
He stands beneath the Eden tree
Coring apples making sauce
Keeping count of all the loss

Feeding change the tunes of time
Melting down the strange of grime
Cycling the wheat in sweep
Filling the abyss with reap

He does not stay he does not stop
He does not weigh the weight of crop
But cuts the thistle with the rose
And never ever does he doze

It is a job I would not care
Forever is too long a share
I’d rather be a flowers bloom
Then be the bristle of the broom

So think a second thought of grace
And be you happy with your place.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-04-23 07:23 AM

Another lesson from the core...
Sy, you're a store of evermore...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2004-04-23 07:42 AM

The reaper does not sweep for me
He stands beneath the Eden tree
Coring apples making sauce
Keeping count of all the loss

============================

Your poetic mind is more brilliant than a mere moth could define. Those lines above are all the proof I need.
Randy says forget the sauce...we'll bake you an apple pie.

*L*

*ww*

... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ...
the light changes when you're in the room.

M.B.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-04-23 07:47 AM

He does not stay he does not stop
He does not weigh the weight of crop
But cuts the thistle with the rose
And never ever does he doze

He can't, he's working overtime...smile

Whata write/right as always, your poems are not only intellectual but filled with all kinds of thoughts rolling off that busy muse of yours. Splendid! Good good morning to ya

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-04-23 07:57 AM

"I’d rather be a flowers bloom
Then be the bristle of the broom

So think a second thought of grace
And be you happy with your place."

Wonderful pearls of wisdom this early morn Sy!
Happy TGIF!
Have a wonderful weekend.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2004-04-23 08:17 AM

Sy, you are definately a flower's bloom. And a man of wisdom.

believe in what your heart feels...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-04-23 11:30 AM

I suppose you are right

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2004-04-23 05:58 PM

enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2004-04-23 06:34 PM

Sunshine
Thank you sweety.

JM,
You are the whip cream on my pie.
WWRS

LeeJ
Thank you dear, a very nice reply.

Nancy,
Will do my best for the weekend.

scorpio
Thank you my friend.

passing,
I suppose.

vandana,
Thank you dear.

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