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Open Poetry #32

the eternal struggle.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-04-23 12:31 PM

is she everything you've ever wanted?
everything i couldn't be
uneasy glances.
why can't you look me in the eyes..
you don't even know how much i ~~loved~~..died for you..

to live is to love,
to love is to bleed..
so where does that leave us?
broken hearted on the floor.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-04-23 01:43 AM

I relate

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-04-23 10:45 AM

A question Im sure we've al wanted to ask,,,,,happily, I see my ex's woman as my exact opposite,,,weak, controlable, simple,,,,,just what he wanted,,lol,,,,,good write

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-04-23 02:11 PM

Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed!

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

4 posted 2004-04-23 02:24 PM

We are all on the floor with you...nice poem.
Love is a struggle.

loner187
Member

since 2004-03-21

Posts 106
Upstate New York

5 posted 2004-04-23 11:00 PM

We can all relate, love's a lose-lose situation...until you find the one. Or atleast for the time when you think you have.

What if the hokey pokey is what it's all about?

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

6 posted 2004-04-23 11:11 PM

exhale,
I liked in your write how you crossed off the word love and changed it to die.
Something e.e. cummings would have done.
pictureme :-)

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2004-04-23 11:16 PM

tired of that floor

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