nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
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2004-04-15
08:27 AM
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At A Mind's Pace *
They come, the words before my eyes Exposed in write at this mind's pace. I leave behind the trail to lead Sweet wanderings between the space
Of lines and blanks of how I feel In moderation, dreams I stake. Serenity to pass the night, A reign of warmth from which I take
To hearten passion's kisses, free, To voice what lips alone can't say. Enticed to play the rhythm's tunes And dawn the mourning of my stay.
I place the pace of words afore The walk of talk prepared in thought. Minced at times, to flavor save those days of feelings overwrought.
The sun shines daily in this life If only deep within my soul To comfort me when gloom has shown And tried to down this half of whole.
Those passing shadows reach to touch, Armed in understanding words. But it is He who holds my faith And takes away the pain unheard.
This struggle is, and wills to be The better part of strength to gain. I keep this diamond, memories of To reinforce "what is remains".
If I profess or claim to be, Asserting each for all to see It is but I, a mind's pace flow Each step in walking, a stride in know.
M
* title inspired by Seymour
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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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2004-04-15
09:08 AM
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This is a really excellant peom M...it flows so well...and speaks volumes of your inner most thoughts...well done..
thank you...
Goldenrose.
''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''- Dalai Lama
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Jeffrey Carter
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since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!
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2004-04-15
09:29 AM
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Isn't it funny how when we write that our inner-most feelings seem to just fall onto the page? great write
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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
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2004-04-15
09:31 AM
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Excellent write Maureen... Congrats on 11,000 posts!!  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
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2004-04-15
12:21 PM
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"But it is He who holds my faith And takes away the pain unheard."
 ~ Amen
A lovely write, Dear M 
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
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2004-04-15
12:43 PM
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Those passing shadows reach to touch, Armed in understanding words.
a heart-and-soul write
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muted
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since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
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2004-04-15
12:47 PM
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 always a lovely read from you
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