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CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2004-04-22 06:27 PM

She Asks

Why do you love me -- She whispers at night
As Her hand in mine is concealed from sight.

I love You -- because it cannot be else…

For it is Fate that cannot be broken
It is the words that cannot be spoken
It is the day that follows the night
It is the victory after the fight
It is the rain that falls to the ground
It is the bell that shatters the sound
It is the joy of the long-waited birth
It is the Moon that orbits the Earth.

You are in all that I feel and I touch
You are the essence of things that I clutch
You dance in the fields that pass by my eye
You laugh with the wind send a yearning sigh
Your kiss that lingers as a wave on the sea
Your smile that stokes the fire in me.
It is all that exists -- held within my hand
And all that can be -- stands where You now stand.

Why do I love You? Because it cannot be else…

CG

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2004-04-22 06:31 PM

Very nice. All good reasons too.
JL

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-04-22 10:19 PM

Lucky girl!

Susan

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-04-22 10:20 PM

yes indeed a lucky girl

lovely.

What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god
What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin.

Go Alanis!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2004-04-22 10:20 PM

oooh I love this one!!

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-04-23 04:28 PM

A talented write.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2004-05-31 08:46 PM

You certainly have a wonderful way with words.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2004-05-31 09:27 PM

Simply stated.
Liked this one too.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

8 posted 2004-06-01 12:49 PM

No need for questions when one knows the answers~

Felt in thy words, so deeply touching~

Without one finger I feel ten thousand touches all at once~ mainly touching my heart!

~Loved it~ one who expects no more or no less!

I see you~I feel You~you are near!

~Thy Lady

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-06-01 02:20 AM

a beautiful ending

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

10 posted 2004-06-01 02:24 AM

Oh my God! SOO sweet! I love your writing, the hopless romantic in me is just going crazy over this. Its so beautiful, nicely done!
~Live and Laugh~

The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow
~Bella~

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

11 posted 2004-06-01 02:29 AM

oh i loved this, yes indeed a very lucky lady

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