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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

0 posted 2004-04-21 09:38 PM

I walked through the forest
to forget your memory
but it was your voice,
the whispers of every tree

I waited for the rain
to wash me away
to cleanse me of emotions
of my yesterday

the rain became a river
that lead me to you
and left my heart swirling
in pools of aqua blue

the pools became the ocean
I thought at last I would be free
but all along you were the tides
ever pulling me........

~SEA~

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2004-04-21 10:03 PM

sigh ohhhhhh sigh but you KNEW i would love this...helen

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-04-21 10:09 PM

Lovely flow to this.
TD

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2004-04-22 12:41 PM

thank you Helen

thanks TD

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-22 02:41 AM

touching....so very touching

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2004-04-22 10:27 AM

I walked through the forest
to forget your memory
but it was your voice,
the whispers of every tree
==========================

the rain became a river
that lead me to you
and left my heart swirling
in pools of aqua blue

the pools became the ocean
I thought at last I would be free
but all along you were the tides
ever pulling me........
========================

I WISH I HAD WROTE THIS!!!!

... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ...
the light changes when you're in the room.

M.B.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-04-22 10:31 AM

A well written poem, soft and warm.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-04-22 10:38 AM

Susan...Your writing is incredible..
Love this so much!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2004-04-22 11:32 AM

sometimes those whipers are to loud for rain and rivers to block the sound, ever pulling of the tides....yes understanding this

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

9 posted 2004-04-23 01:17 PM

This deserves to be back on top...very beautiful poem. One of your best. And the picture matches it perfectly.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2004-04-23 01:30 PM

YES! a fine fine write, wish I'd written this one. Loved the way you pulled the reader in.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2004-04-23 01:49 PM

outstanding, beautiful...oh how I love the sea...and your picture looks like a favorite place I love to go in Long Beach Island...wonderfully woven! Thanks a bunch

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2004-04-23 05:58 PM

liked this a lot

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2004-04-23 06:57 PM

SEA~
Oh gal ... this is just my *sighs*~

'I thought at last I would be free
but all along you were the tides
ever pulling me........'

Lovely, lovely, lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2004-04-23 06:58 PM

What JM said, m'dear...

me, too.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2004-04-23 08:06 PM

Lovely...the picture reminds me of a place I have been in Florida...James

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

16 posted 2004-04-24 09:42 PM

It's Gaia, you know . . .

nice poem, too

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

17 posted 2004-04-24 10:00 PM

"I walked through the forest
to forget your memory
but it was your voice,
the whispers of every tree

I waited for the rain
to wash me away
to cleanse me of emotions
of my yesterday"

I see we are still walking in parallel universes.

I've missed ya ...

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

18 posted 2004-04-24 11:38 PM

I will be saying those last 9 words for days...they have molded in my heart and are now a part of me. What a wonderful piece!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

19 posted 2004-04-25 12:15 PM

Moving is the word that comes to mind for me!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

ESP
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

20 posted 2004-12-01 06:36 AM

"the pools became the ocean
I thought at last I would be free
but all along you were the tides
ever pulling me........"

...exactly...

*hug*, Lizzie

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

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