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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2004-07-01 04:52 AM


When blue midnight melts
the sky of stars to form your
dreams as you sleep, my
love will steal to your heart.

Bringing the absorbed beauty
of the wild to enrapture you
with views and vistas to
induce trembles and cool bumps.

Love so pure it prickles your
smooth skin, like a sudden chill
draught through a summer window.
Delicate yet deeply percieved.

Sleeping in silence you breath in
my love, i enter your senses.
Beaming beauteous wonder, of wild
nature onto the theatre of your mind.

Mountain ranges, with peaks
covered by snow, reflecting the sun.
Waterfalls of white water falling
hundreds of feet forming rivers.

Rivers turn to streams, softly
tinkling rivulets of water.
There you are bathing, washing
with white Lotus flowers in your hair.

Approaching you i wrap my arms
around your body so dear to me.
Leaning back to recieve my kiss,
love and nature is within and around us.

''Death where is thy sting? Love where is thy glory?'' William Shakespeare.

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2004-07-01 05:27 AM


OH MY!!!!!! SO...SO....Passionate and perfect...I love You! and the poem!

Love Wildflower!

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)


Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2004-07-01 07:20 AM


"Dreams, Love and Nature" ~ What was not to absolutely adore with this captivating poem that truly did prickle my "smooth skin, like a sudden chill draught through a summer window. Delicate yet deeply percieved." !!!


Smiling and oooing,
EA

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-07-01 07:48 AM


oh, such glorious happy images you project...very lovely poem...happy weekend!
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2004-07-01 07:52 AM


Goldenrose
A lovely poem and a joy to read.

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-07-01 12:16 PM


loved each verse

a beautiful piece

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
6 posted 2004-07-01 12:36 PM


I think a vision of paradise for lovers.  Beautiful write, Goldenrose.  
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