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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2004-06-30 03:02 PM



your three names
remain on tip of tongue
waiting for reasons
any reason
to call

I was almost there
fingers poised against keys
a knot forming anticipation
somewhere in the middle
of dare when reality,
my bitter friend
reminds me again
why "we"

aren't...


~tier


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-06-30 03:05 PM


...your three names...

~*~

What a startled piece
of angst this is...

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-06-30 03:13 PM


I know the feeling, the bitterness displayed for whatever reason, perhaps revenge, one never knows, but your wise to move on.

Hugs...Lee J.

Tiersdin
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3 posted 2004-06-30 04:16 PM


Sunshine, indeed.  

Lee, the poem is old, the feelings no longer exist and I did consider not posting the poem.  Perhaps I should have gone with my first mind.

Thanks for reading!

~tier

iliana
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4 posted 2004-06-30 05:28 PM


Tier, oh yes, this is angst....I could feel it.   .......jo
Susan
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5 posted 2004-06-30 07:07 PM


I am glad you posted it for it was a thoughtful read and well understood.

  Susan

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Ericc
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6 posted 2004-07-01 02:52 PM


Whew....!!!!

Eric

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7 posted 2004-07-01 05:05 PM


Nah, if you hadn't posted this, we wouldn't have seen ya all angsty an' stuff. *grin*

You wore it well.

Enchantress
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8 posted 2004-07-01 07:21 PM


Tier~I am pleased you did post this one..
but am thankful this period of your life is over.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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9 posted 2004-07-01 10:04 PM


Tiersdin~
You write the angst well~

There is someone who used to post here, Doreen Peri, who would LOVE IT !
Think I'll send it to her ... she tickles me with her fondness for 'angst'~

Thank you for sharing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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10 posted 2004-07-03 01:18 PM


sometimes we need a kick in the butt from reality to remind us and stop us from making the same mistake again
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