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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-06-30 02:29 PM


Every crack in the pavement speaks faith
Parted fingers touch the forehead of self-made
Unholy promises imprisoned the nerves in my heart
Summer wheat won’t be lost in the dark

No longer fearing the blade of night
Beauty is fact completely wrapped in eyesight
Understanding the way which I could not see
Walking like an alcoholic, hand in hand with sirens

Used to speak that language
But I died my hair green
Moved to New York, bought a Nomad’s dream
I’ve escaped that mortal death
No longer loosing sleep, counting every step
Cracks in the sidewalk…ohhhh, superstitious me?

You wonder sometimes bout gestures
Who pronounces the moon?
Their meanings, pondering how the
Heck he did that?  What could he have been doing?
He was a smooth talker on the run
Flew right in my dreams like Superman
In a neurotic sort of way, without any rhythm
Fastening me to aloneness, like dying
I was only his summer romance
Where’s that kryptonite when you need it?
Misaligned by all his secrets

Yes, I agree, it was my idiosyncrasies which allowed
Him to keep trying, I departed this life like an insect
Short lived yet, perhaps with some purpose
The calm white sea which was our single bed
Left pock marks in my forehead
Envying life, Christ and myself
Wishing I knew a supernatural elf

I’ve chewed the manual seamless
So my better returns could thrive
Now unschooled with my own dimensions
Not diving into shallow fountains
Adventure has somehow lost its venue
Placing emotions under curfew

Repainting my stairs, now stenciling stars
With a calm blue watered memoir
Massaging reward is another cigarette
Teaching yoga to migrating sunsets

Yet the balance can’t help but be seen
Stretching and breathing cuisine
Trees are growing in my room
No longer chasing time’s vacuum
I’ve got a biological clock
Well versed like a four leaf shamrock

No more swallowing me whole without a thought
Or prereleased layers of Betsy Rose’s house
My thoughts will not again return to Williamsburg
Or the soul you owned strictly for ego’s sake
There was a richer more subtle flame, but you left it to die
And in this death I’ve consecrated a new life


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-06-30 03:07 PM



Your writing always makes
for an interesting read...


iliana
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2 posted 2004-06-30 05:27 PM


"Flew right in my dreams like Superman
In a neurotic sort of way, without any rhythm
Fastening me to aloneness, like dying
I was only his summer romance
Where’s that kryptonite when you need it?
Misaligned by all his secrets"

There were so many good phrases in this one -- I picked out one of my favorites.  You sound very strong in this write -- more power to you!   ....jo

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