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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-06-29 04:30 PM



No more than this.

Our slightest touch becomes
unending in its motion.

And in the distance that falls to later
years...we continue in the passage of
this tremor.

No more than this.

Yet worlds are born from
nothing less.

[This message has been edited by Ericc (06-29-2004 07:15 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2004-06-29 04:42 PM


"Our slightest touch becomes
unending in its motion."

~ Now that's my kind of lovin'!

To love and loving!
Linda

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2004-06-29 04:45 PM


Our slightest touch becomes
unending in its motion.

And in the distance that fall to later
years...we continue in the passage of
this tremor.

====================


have mercy........

*moth puddle*



Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-06-29 04:49 PM


"Our slightest touch becomes
unending in its motion."

My oh my Eric.....this is one beautiful piece of writing.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2004-06-29 05:05 PM


Ericc
One of your best.

jwesley
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Spring, Texas
5 posted 2004-06-29 05:07 PM


good write my friend...

I agree it's one of your best

jwesley

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with you
6 posted 2004-06-29 06:23 PM


"And in the distance that fall to later
years...we continue in the passage of
this tremor."


oh yeah.....
i know this
beautiful!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
7 posted 2004-06-29 06:24 PM


"No more than this.
Yet worlds are born from
nothing less."

Now, that is really stunning, Eric!  *smile* ......jo



Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
8 posted 2004-06-29 06:46 PM


Agree, agree, agree.  You are one who can put so much in so few words.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
9 posted 2004-06-29 10:42 PM


You have described ecstacy, with breathtaking precision.

An astounding write.
TD

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
10 posted 2004-06-29 11:32 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Eric, as usual.

Take care.........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

passing shadows
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displaced
11 posted 2004-06-30 04:28 AM


...

what can I say

Tiersdin
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east coast
12 posted 2004-06-30 08:07 AM


Encore!


~tier

SimplyGold
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13 posted 2004-06-30 09:44 AM


A fan. It's all been said. Incredible!

Now I can only wait for the next.

SG

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

14 posted 2004-06-30 10:03 AM


Yet worlds are born from
nothing less.


and such is life

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