Open Poetry #32 |
Butterflies of Spirit |
James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Butterflies of Spirit butterflies of spirit mine own seeking their place of weathering the winter of me flowed along instinct knowing pathways of air trails of light within knowing already where lay the peaceful grove gathered slowly one by some from those far places of my summering settled like leaves along the branches of your soul |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I like this very much. What a beautiful concept, butterflies of spirit. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
James, I'd been wondering where you'd gone. It's good to read you again. Beautiful as usual. Take care, miscellanea |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Butterfly spirits... You should have seen the yellow swallowtail butterflies in the Rockies... so abundant... so beautiful! Why...you must have sent them! |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
In Pismo Beach and also in Monterey, there are groves of trees where the Monarch butterflies gather to winter over, and to mate in early spring. It's simply incredible to look up at an 80-foot Eucalyptus whose branches are cloaked in brown leaves -- and suddenly realize that all those leaves are butterflies! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie I've seen those butterflies....they are pretty amazing. Your poem is also! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well with the images in your lovely poem and your explanation of those trees, I have just a beautiful painting in my mind, thank you. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was absolutely beautiful James. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful write, my friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that would be a truly awesome sight! great poem! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have poetically expressed your "knowing" spirit... EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
gathered slowly one by some from those far places of my summering settled like leaves along the branches of your soul This is incredibly lovely... as tender as the touch of a butterfly... or a spirit. *S* I didn't know it was possible to write peace... but you did. *S* |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a lovely write -- much enjoyed! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I liked |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Lovely, the way your words flutter down the page, and even more where they settled. Real nice, James_A~ |
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