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Making sense of love songs.....
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Making sense of love songs..... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Love songs only made melodies after I had fallen out of my own.... making sense after I had combed through every way we had tangled and cut away. Disembodied petals are romancing the sill still delicately alive... I had never known the brutality of nature 'til this. And still until we crossed I only ever knew vacant beauty of lust I had never watched the tall Gods outside every window in passing intermittent breeze over thier bodies as clouds switch on and off the yellow skin of light that is laden over bridges of branches until you left me in the quiet of it all. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
making sense after I had combed through every way we had tangled and cut away. Isn't this the truth?! Well expressed! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi there prety laydee, wow.. this is fabulous...absolutely! it's mine, I'm keeping it. Mxx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Its like buying a new car, one you know no one in your town has .... .... but once you bought it, they're everywhere!! ... time to get a scooter!! A Beautiful Smile Milady! *S |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the whole write but the ending grabbed me |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Disembodied petals are romancing the sill" I love that I always have a hard time picking favorite lines from what you write.  Excellent!"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
as clouds switch on and off the yellow skin of light that is laden over bridges of branches and you dear girl leave me speechless, what talent you have! Your an inspiration, and oh, by the way, love your pic, you've got beautiful eyes...eyes which see volumns. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A wonderful read...maybe the best I've seen of yours. Love the metaphors! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Love songs only made melodies after I had fallen out of my own.... making sense after I had combed through every way we had tangled and cut away." Gem, you have a way of saying things that makes me wish I could spend a day just rambling through your head...  |
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