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Open Poetry #32

Supernatural days.....

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2004-04-21 09:30 AM

As we recall forgotten details
she is captured by all we forget
throughout our ordinary days
our ordinary lives

there is more than this

heat upon her skull tells her so
hairs that rise from bowed submission
like a crowd rising from their seats

someone else is getting through

I remember my fear
watching her suffer flashbacks not of her own
I remember my dreams
of fire and fatalities

and I wonder why they chose us

mother and child
sharing every instance of life
but this

and fear silenced me
I admit

The black rage of unknown
could close my eyes
in an instant

misunderstanding the intent

And i'll always wonder if
that Christmas we peiced together their message
after all those years

they put out their fires
and lay to rest

.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-04-21 09:34 AM

gemjop
Good write, enjoyed the read.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-04-21 09:37 AM

heat upon her skull tells her so
hairs that rise from bowed submission
like a crowd rising from their seats

oooh shivers...

hairs that rise from bowed submission
like a crowd rising from their seats

Wow, love that line.
Great one Gem