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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
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0 posted 2004-06-27 03:01 PM

                        Slipping
                      Fall
                    Creeping
                  Crawl

               Where is a table,
               Compelling hand?

                 Clipping
                   Call
                     Weeping
                        haul


                When will she stand?
            How far away Furniture Land

[This message has been edited by miscellanea (06-27-2004 07:28 PM).]

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2004-06-27 03:54 PM

Hi miscellanea. This is the foirst post of yours I have stopped in to read...and I loved it! Great piece. It definitely brought a smile to my face...and I think it is my favorite piece of the day thus far. Bravo...and keep up these great pieces.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
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2 posted 2004-06-27 04:28 PM

Not sure I understand. I keep getting images of trying to feel my way through the dark, I fall, then crawl to find the table to pull myself up. Am I right? A riddle of a poem.

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
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3 posted 2004-06-27 04:41 PM

evocative verse,
    I'm glad you stopped to read, enjoying what you read.
              miscellanea
iliana,
    Think like a toddler.  How desperate they are to reach their goals, and when they can't?  Thanks for commenting.
              miscellanea

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
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4 posted 2004-06-27 06:43 PM

Very cute!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-06-27 07:03 PM

I could see this. There is not much cuter than a baby gaining its feet. Very nice. Like the title too.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
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6 posted 2004-06-27 07:28 PM

iliana,
  Thanks for stopping back.  We're all toddling at times.  Glad you liked it.
                miscellanea

Susan,
    Glad you enjoyed this.  I enjoy your work, as well.
                miscellanea

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