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SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

0 posted 2004-06-26 06:36 PM

Today there is light
  warm to the bone working its way deep
to the space that is beyond matter

Its radiance
cannot be explained
it just is

Today there is light
  the curve of your smile working its way deep
to a place that is beyond the heart

Its radiance
cannot be explained
it just is

Today there is sunshine
  giving of energy mixing with the rich soil
of the planets body

Its radiance
we try to explain
but it just is

You are the experience
  there is nothing to explain

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2004-06-26 08:05 PM

SG, indeed today there is light in your poetic thoughts. Very creative and expressive writing!

Smiling here!
EA

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-06-26 08:07 PM

Oooooooooh, I liiiike this! Yes indeed.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-06-26 08:12 PM

I so much enjoyed this, SimplyGold. It was very uplifting.

........jo

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

4 posted 2004-06-27 12:15 PM

Thank you EA. As they sang in the show Hair, "Let the Sunshine in"

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

5 posted 2004-06-27 12:16 PM

Susan, thank you for taking the time to read my work, especially for the encouraging words.

SG

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

6 posted 2004-06-27 12:20 PM

iliana,

I have been reading your work and I enjoy it very much thus, making your comments even sweeter.

SG

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2004-06-27 12:42 PM

Great write...perhaps my favorite of yours...and there are many!

Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-06-27 12:44 PM

wow! love those last lines!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2004-06-27 11:35 PM

Such elegance.
TD

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2004-06-28 01:40 PM

AG, yes, sometimes things are.....
they just are....
This is a good poem.
Hugs,
Ethel

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