Open Poetry #32 |
Gentle Touch |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Gentle the touch as waking winds billow the curtain’s furling gate. As spoken thoughts always ponder in search of one’s own chosen fate. A life did fill the emptiness within the pit of my hunger. Where smiles and hugs did take away the fears of flashes and thunder. A sentinel, a confidant a fount of wisdom from within. A place to share a thought or two of then or now, this man of men. I’ll keep a spirit at my side when needed rest does take to dreams. As waters fall into the pool of crystal falls and cool clear streams. I love you, O king of my heart forever I shall kneel before. As mountains rise before the sea and waves caress the windward shore. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Barry, this is beyond precious. I have no words...... .......jo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For several reasons... this caused some salty, but smiling tears. I am finding that I haven't lost sync with so many of the poets here... Well done, Magnus. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry, is this a photo of your father? You are as handsome as he was. You captured your father's "gentle touch" with that of your own... To Love Eternal, Linda |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are such a passionate poet, Barry~ This is an endearing tribute, from a fine man. Wonderful writing, dear Sir~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry One of the most wonderful things I've learned in this life, is that love never dies! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
What wonderful words of rememberance and love. Touches the heart. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful write dear Magnus...wonderful. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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