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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-06-24 09:43 AM


When it all fades to gray,
An there's nothing more to say.
I think it's time I disappear.
Confusion fueled by a lonesome feeling,
Illusions of us to be slowly peeling.
And it's time I disappear.
Feeling like I'm forgotten,
Like everything is spoiled and rotten.
So it's time I disappear.
And then you call my name,
And nothing stays the same.
But still I disappear.
You're all I see,
Don't rob that from me.
Or I'll surely disappear.
Deep down I know what's right,
But it's hard to win this fight.
So I'm gonna disappear.
In my heart I know what's right,
But it's hard without you in sight.
I don't wanna disappear...

The fear I see when I look in your eyes makes you believe I'm one of a kind

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2004-06-24 10:25 AM


Oh, Sweet Flakes From Hades, I am extending a wing to you! Hang on! I will not let you disappear!

I do so feel your pain in this plaintive plea of a poem. You write with such emotion and your readers cannot help but feel some of what your feel when they read your words.

Teddy bear hugs,
EA

vandana
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Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
2 posted 2004-06-24 10:32 AM


enjoyed
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-06-24 11:33 AM


Excellent write Kyle...
and we won't ever let you disappear.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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