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I Disappear |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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When it all fades to gray, An there's nothing more to say. I think it's time I disappear. Confusion fueled by a lonesome feeling, Illusions of us to be slowly peeling. And it's time I disappear. Feeling like I'm forgotten, Like everything is spoiled and rotten. So it's time I disappear. And then you call my name, And nothing stays the same. But still I disappear. You're all I see, Don't rob that from me. Or I'll surely disappear. Deep down I know what's right, But it's hard to win this fight. So I'm gonna disappear. In my heart I know what's right, But it's hard without you in sight. I don't wanna disappear... The fear I see when I look in your eyes makes you believe I'm one of a kind |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Sweet Flakes From Hades, I am extending a wing to you! Hang on! I will not let you disappear! I do so feel your pain in this plaintive plea of a poem. You write with such emotion and your readers cannot help but feel some of what your feel when they read your words. Teddy bear hugs, EA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Kyle... and we won't ever let you disappear. Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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