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MexicoCityBlues
Junior Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 48
The Point of Know Return

0 posted 2004-06-24 12:49 PM

I see you melting.

I stand beneath you
With a cup.

I want to get caught
When you start to rain.

Downpour.

I wipe your delicate soul
off the ground.

Dry my clothes
On your line.

I see blood
In your puddle.

Evaporate.

I stand beneath you
With a cup.

"Do you know? This world is totally fugazi." --Marillion

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iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-06-24 12:55 PM

That is devotion....enjoyed the read!

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2004-06-24 01:20 AM

I don't really know what to say...
this is just....

wow

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-06-24 02:55 AM

awesome!

I wish someone would hold a cup under me

Snow

Deputy Moderator 1 Tour

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2004-06-24 03:44 AM

like this, i do !

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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