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Open Poetry #32

Dust and Dirt

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2004-06-22 02:06 PM

Were there a million souls
Crying out
Laying dirty
And hurt
Filled with dust
And dirt...
Were there a million voices
In your head
Screaming,
Bleeding,
Laying dirty
And hurt
Filled with dust
And dirt...
Were there a million tears
Cupped in your hands
Seeping,
Leaking
Laying dirty
And hurt
Filled with dust
And dirt...
Were a million hearts
Strung to your soul
Pleading,
Weeping
Laying dirty
And hurt
Filled with dust
And dirt...
The only
That would love you,
I, True
Complete and thru
Laying dirty
And hurt
Filled with dust
And dirt.

a-alibaster June 22, 2004

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make you bleed it isn't worth it"-alibaster

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

1 posted 2004-06-23 03:08 AM

wow. this is really awesome. it flows really well. great job!

"Love takes off masks that we fear we cannot live without and know we cannot live within."
-James Baldwin

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-06-23 03:17 AM

WOW, now that is a potent poem. Although it's kind of dark, I really liked it.

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