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Gareotemsti
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0 posted 2004-06-22 11:35 AM


A simple mirror will turn around,
The image that you see,
It is the same appearance
But backwards imagery.

The letters on an ambulance,
That are written on the hood,
Are backwards for a reason,
In your mirror they're understood.

The image in a mirror
Sometimes can deceive,
Objects may be closer
Then they appear to be.

'Reedallab' for instance,
In a mirror is something more,
It's still an ugly image
But that's what mirrors are for.

Gareotemsti
Is beauty uncompared,
His image in the mirror
Is a cuddly teddy bear.

© Copyright 2004 Gareotemsti - All Rights Reserved
Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
1 posted 2004-06-22 12:09 PM


Gosh darn it. I have to go get a mirror to see who it is. Oh! It's You! Mr. Bad.or Mr.
?????.. I won't tell.
Cute
Hugs BonBon

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-06-22 12:17 PM


hehehe...have you gotten bored?

I love it when you shake stuff up

I won't give it away either but I hope you don't keep that username *untwisting tongue*

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-06-22 12:26 PM


Heh heh...very clever!!!!!!!
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2004-06-22 12:52 PM


hmmm....this seems so very familiar...but I'll never tell.  Well done sir, very very unique!
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2004-06-22 02:01 PM


I love cuddly teddy bears! But I have to count all their toes before they can snuggle up with me in bed!

With loves 'n laughs,
Adnilemsti

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
6 posted 2004-06-22 02:36 PM


What a wonderful post...you are truly a talented poet....geesch! I wish I could write like this?...And look?...All the women replying?....Oh well, some people got it...some people aint!
Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2004-06-22 03:24 PM


OMG Gare is sooooooo attractive!!!

Much better than that Toe guy.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
8 posted 2004-06-22 08:09 PM


LOL

you are something else alright!

Temptress
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9 posted 2004-06-22 08:29 PM


cute cute cute
I know who!

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


Larry C
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10 posted 2004-06-22 09:56 PM


Toe,
At least we know where to find good company!
And is it me? Or are you in love with yourself?!

Gareotemsti,
I'm sure reed' won't mind. Well, I'm pretty sure. Actually, I think you're in trouble. But still reed' in a mirror is almost as funny as 'deer in headlights!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
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11 posted 2004-06-22 10:42 PM


Clever one, ---  Enjoyed your wit!
         Sadie

Balladeer
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12 posted 2004-06-23 12:02 PM


Why does it not surprise me to see a back-assward poem from you?

Clever writing, you old drater...

suthern
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13 posted 2004-06-24 03:27 PM


I've not seen you in quite a while
And do appreciate this smile!
One thing for sure - there's no bad view
Whenever we're looking at you!!!

LOL... I enjoyed this very much! *S*

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
14 posted 2004-06-24 08:30 PM




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iliana
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15 posted 2004-06-24 11:58 PM


Hehehehe, Toe, you are a kick!   ....jo
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