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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Ocean edged in canvas of blue where meets earth, water, and sky; elements defined in perfect portrait of peace. Ever changing tides of aqua caress tan of sand slightly revising scenic scenes, comes gently the lapping against shore lines horizon softly playing natures song. Sung in perfect melody tonal utterances of captivating harmony, mesmerizing me; such sweet tranquility. Moons silver sliver dances on waters break subtly shimmering light in serene refrains, sensations surrounded by sapphire hues cradling me in timeless memories retain. It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-22-2004 09:59 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sensations surrounded by sapphire hues cradling me in timeless memories retain. as so does your poems...lovely |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks much Lee. I'm just dreaming about the shore again, am going for a visit there this weekend and already my muse wants me to be there! lol. Thanks much for your visit. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Moons silver sliver dances on waters break subtly shimmering light in serene refrains, sensations surrounded by sapphire hues cradling me in timeless memories retain." Oooh...Donna can I come with you??? Lovely this...lovely you. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit A delightful read.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna...so very lovely, this poem, you!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nancy, I would love for you to be able to join me and my friends for our short lived, but much needed visit. The wait is making the week long! We leave on Friday! Sey, thanks so much doll. Martie gal, thanks for the kindness of your heart! You are a treasure... Hey, maybe that's a good sign that there are hidden treasures there? Nah, the oceans treasures are for all to behold yes? lol..... HUGS |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Moons silver sliver dances on waters break subtly shimmering light in serene refrains, =========================== I love that verse..the imagery and the allits...most of all the memories it stirs. I was mezmerized by the ocean at night..it takes on a whole new form beneath the moon. One night Mark and I were by the VA Beach pier and it was really foggy..the ocean was hauntingly beautiful... have a wonderful trip...take lots of pics.  "No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... and I never saw blue like that before. Some things are just the way they are ... and words just cant explain. Oh no, I never saw blue like that before ..." *Shawn Colvin* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is both tranquil and exquisite~ What a pretty picture you've painted.... So lovely you are, Donna~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Gorgeous poem, Gentle Spirit -- I loved the "Moon silver silver" --- ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
"elements defined in perfect portrait of peace." You took me to a place that I needed to be this morning. Your paintbrush is ever beautiful somy. And IF I were gone for 15 years I'd know where to find you...under the willow tree. Love, Reg |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, I just let the mesmerizing images wash over me...Ohhhhh so lovely! Enjoy your time at the beach with your friends! Have lotsa fun in the sun! ~ and take your muse with you! There should be lots of fodder for the poetic mill!  Happy hugs, Linda |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I think you're someone whose poetry I should read more often....there's grace in this, and well, a gentle spirit....those are things I try for but most often fail....so maybe I'll take lessons from you. /pip/Forum89/HTML/002807.html ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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