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Our Blueprint
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Our Blueprint |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Somewhere in beginning there must have been a plan A formula; a blueprint; of woman and of man With basic waves of thinking, embedded and alive To guide us through each moment and to help us all survive At times we think we’re different, but not in basic rule The same thoughts come to test each one and test us for a fool We all need a family and some love to get us through We all share the same odd thoughts, to find they’re nothing new We are all related within the human race Joined by our creator for the future years to face All varying in some ways, but just the same in most We start at the beginning and then finish at the post With simple understanding that we’re born to one-day die And as we all grow older just how quick the years all fly But through it we all ponder with the hope of love to hold To keep us holding life long dreams, until we’re very old We all surround this planet but we’re basically the same We look a little different and might bare a different name Born to give a little and work within a plan Our blueprint of the future, is by woman and of man |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"We are all related within the human race Joined by our creator for the future years to face All varying in some ways, but just the same in most We start at the beginning and then finish at the post" Beyond your wonderfully rhythmic and flowing rhyme scheme, I loved your message in this piece Rick. You've captured this beautifully, from title to last line. Well done, very much enjoyed.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Each and every word of this was so true, and yet, this part jumped out at me, for me, perhaps... We are all related within the human race Joined by our creator for the future years to face All varying in some ways, but just the same in most We start at the beginning and then finish at the post Fabulous writing Rick, always a joyous and exciting experience reading you. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Kit, great to see you here dear friend, thank you so much for your reply, very much appreciated. LeeJ, wonderful to see you as well my friend, thank you for your lovely reply, as well very much appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
born to one day die *sigh* this poem leaves me pondering for the rest of the day now |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Rick, It always amazes me how you string your words together so brilliantly! Your writing is something to be proud of, and I for one stand in awe. Take care, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Dixie, it's true my friend, we can't stop what is the truth, just try to live our lives as best we can while here, thanks for your reply, great to see you, have a great day and take care. Dear Amy, your words spoke straight to my heart, thank you for your wonderful reply dear friend, so very much appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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