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Where Yellow Knows Gold
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Where Yellow Knows Gold |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Touches spell between the light and morning There the brush of sun and moon delight Fine the blend of Godly art adorning Given remnant wishes into sunrise flight Through the sense of touch a new beginning That remembers what has been and needs to be In the whispers of a cotton cloud left spinning It is there the words define the wealth of we And you glow the most amazing shade of wonder In the showering of petals through the mist In see through strike like capillary thunder But the chain that bears your name on times frail wrist Yet to wonder in return of these omissions Might you notice that the breeze is soft and low? Gentle flutter to the hem of sole suspicions As the colors of my dreams be all I know Copyright Kkh 4/20/04 |
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Darker Season Junior Member
since 2004-04-01
Posts 48Wisconsin |
I liked the rhyming and thoughts presented in this peace. Very nice work...and amazing imagery if I do say so myself. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"It is there the words define the wealth of we And you glow the most amazing shade of wonder" oh my, very nice, very thought provoking...and touching  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome rhyme scheme...brilliant theme! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
In the whispers of a cotton cloud left spinning It is there the words define the wealth of we And you glow the most amazing shade of wonder In the showering of petals through the mist ~*~ You do have a deft touch, Kathleen. An enjoyable read! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write. JL |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, I always love the colors of your dreams. Very beautiful!!  Hugs, Ethel |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
ThisDiamond, You're writing touches within. I enjoy your imagery and emotion so very much. SG |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely lovely TD Maree. Have you any dreams you'd like to sell? |
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