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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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damp song carry from lady river sighs she breathes her voice to the souls of cloud men she shimmers their tegument and polishes their ends with her palm pool swirl she is deep current then her dark water moans to the roots of tree people she is wanton for intrusion a mistress with rings and echos what gypsy plays her music and leaves her bed before she wakes what sun skin satan makes her shun the dawn ______________________ Dark |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
what gypsy plays'' softer the resound-- lovely the image  ~~**~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful images Dark.. Much enjoyment for my eyes this morning. Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
love the imagery here Mr Dark. Enjoyed Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS--- You speak for Lady River beautifully!  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
mm hm, I know this river. The currents of your mind have carried me away somewhere... ~K~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mmmm thanks to you all for putting up with my tattoos on napkins here.. wish I could be a minute in each of your lives to say thanks is not enough |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
damp song carry from lady river sighs she breathes her voice to the souls of cloud men she shimmers their tegument and polishes their ends with her palm pool swirl she is deep current then =============================== your imagery, vocabulary and word play make my shutter finger and hike feet ache for a river road. love the undercurrent and ripples of this one DS. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I'm in need of a lazy river...afloat on some tube down south with a bottle of wine and tater chips. Not even caring that I made it to the ocean and floated all the way to the west coast, a little less pale. Love, Reg |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
she shimmers their tegument and polishes their ends with her palm pool swirl she is deep current then That's some midnight ripple trickling down DS, but I'm guessing, she liked riding the raging rapids even more.  Good on ya, slick~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
JM.......would be pleased to be incentive for your national geographicing if you provide me with virgin copy..(grin) thanks lady J for your views ______________ Ms rwood..speaking of strangers...oh yes..you need a river..ok, let me lend you this one I found behind the old gas station down at the fork in the road..you may need a guide though it is a class 0 rapid...thanks for the read ms Regina ______________ Ms Bluezy, yes, the rapids seem to have been what she needed for her canyons,,but not sure if she wants the all the time..thanks lady friend for your eyes |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds of a pleased Mississip... |
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