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break my heart in two
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break my heart in two |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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i just your what matters to me. break my heart in two and say it was you that did it your my downfall, have i told you that lately? have i told you how much i hate you i hate you..so much.. wipe away my tears wipe away my hope like everything else.. clean slate a blank canvas of emotions what if theres no more time to tell me that i'm alive what if by then..i'm gone.. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Chelsea oh hon I so understand the need to feel beautiful....this has such power.... ~~**~~ |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Whoa... a serious write, full of honest emotion. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Good one! JL  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"i just want need you to say i'm beautiful your what matters to me. break my heart in two and say it was you that did it your my downfall, have i told you that lately?" this... is powerful |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Very sad poem, if you feel the person is your downfall you need to let them go. Love isn't worth constant unhapiness. Hope things get better. Enjoyed the poem. Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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