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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-06-20 11:33 AM



Another Sad Sunday


it is just
another sad Sunday
the anniversary of
an angry goodbye day
and I spend my time
desperately trying to
recall the moments
I can not remember
of words that echo
in this thick silence
I know where it is I am
and where it is from
where I have come
I am lost to Sunday
and I just do not know
where it is I am to go
I am glued numbly to
walk through weekdays
and nights lacking dreams
where other’s faces melt
to always become yours
oh how it is I wish
I were more like you
able to go on with no hurt
less insecurity and unflawed
but …my heart
can not work that way
I am caught in
the revolving door of
of what really is
and how I still feel
and I am no closer
to forgetting today than
I was yesterday or
the day before that
so here I am so empty
in the arms of just
another sad Sunday

"be prepared to bleed"  Joni Mitchell

© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Copperbell
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1 posted 2004-06-20 12:17 PM


"hugs"
passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-06-20 12:29 PM


I'm here if you wanna talk
gemjop
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3 posted 2004-06-24 08:38 AM


one to keep.

back up to the top with this...


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-06-24 09:21 AM


1slick_lady
All rides come to an end, but you can ride the echoes. Good write

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5 posted 2004-06-24 10:22 AM



Goodknight
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6 posted 2004-06-24 04:42 PM


life realities woven into a wonderfully written emotional powerhouse - you write it so well -  hugs - Paul
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