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Soundtrack of our lives
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Soundtrack of our lives |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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the air around us is so still you could hear a pin drop you're looking at me like you have something to say your eyes speak volumes so your mouth doesn't have to move and say the words i know you'll never mean stopping yourself just short of regret do we have to speak at all? wouldn't it be better if we just kept quiet, so the world can't even hear us breathing. you're trying to look at me trying to see who i am you don't need to know me there's nothing there worth knowing an empty shell of a women longing to be more than she is trying to be something but something can never come from nothing. the soundtrack of our lives, is playing in the backround empty words sung to an empty tune trying to help us find the meaning to that which we'll never know we're not supposed to.. wouldn't it be better it we just kept quiet, so the world can't even hear us breathing.. do you even know i'm here?.. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You write with such a depth of pain and longing. Please, you are more than a shell, you have the potential of a goddess in the making, remember that. Hugs, Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
"you're trying to look at me trying to see who i am you don't need to know me there's nothing there worth knowing an empty shell of a women longing to be more than she is trying to be something but something can never come from nothing." Your poem was so incredibly moving. How could one be of nothing that writes so incredibly richly? Your work is amazing. You are most intelligent, gifted, and compassionate. All traits of one cherished and valuable. Your poetic friend, Kevin |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 ouch |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Cheer up. I am sure you are more than what you think you are worth. - James |
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