Open Poetry #32 |
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You..... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
You gave me your legacy my birthday and my life Your quietness, hesitancy a treasured old sharpened knife. You gave me your wisdom, you shared with me your tears. Those moments of old iron trains and baseball season’s cheers. A smile and a hearty laugh that lasts through all time. A warm hug, a thought or two an old worn weathered dime. You gave me the air I breath as you made a small babe cry. Without I might not have been without you, I might have died. You guided me down a worn path beyond the light where shadows lay. You calmed the fear and fright I felt... You carried me back home to stay. I never won the annual phone call race to be the first to tell to you Merry Christmas, Happy Turkey Day or simply that I loved you too. This year is so much different without your voice to hear. The silence is overwhelming and sadness brings a tear. Happy Father’s Day Dad.... I would have called you if only I could.... [This message has been edited by Magnus (06-20-2004 09:40 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Barry...you have poured your heart and soul into this write. Absolutely beautiful and filled with so many memories. I know it will be hard this year..but it does get easier. Your dad is very proud of you, you can be sure of that. ~Heart hugs and soft smiles, Nancy~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful, loving write Barry...as I knew it would be when it came (been waiting for it you see...). It's all I expected and more. jwesley |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh my, this is soooo beautiful and such a loving tribute. Thanks so much for sharing. ![]() The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
This is about the most moving, roller coaster ride of emotions, write I have read here. It spoke to me loudly. My ears still stinging from the depth and purposed message you so penned so eloquently. I have a lump in my throat. Not easy to do to me. I remember well a lot of your memories in my relationship with my father. Oh, how I have taken all of those things and put them up in the cobwebs, nearly forgotten. What a travesty that would have been. You have reminded me of how unconditionally my father loves me, regardless of the fact that we don't talk much - both to busy. You made me excited to call him. Your poem was both inspiring and amazing. Thank you very much for the gift you have just given me. Warm regards, Kevin |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very very touching you break my heart softly at times |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Barry, ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You guided me down a worn path beyond the light where shadows lay. You calmed the fear and fright I felt... You carried me back home to stay. Lovely Magnus my friend. Should have been a hanky alert with this one. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very touching..tears in my eyes. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry A loving tribute, dear man...you may be able to call him on the spirit line, for something tells me he is listening to your rhyme. ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, this poem really touched my heart. I could feel your pain throughout. I can only imagine how hard it is this Father's Day for you. My thoughts are with you, dear Barry. ![]() Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry, you had no need to call your father ~ he heard your heart speak. ![]() A beautiful write from a beautiful soul. Your father is smiling at you... Loving hugs, Linda |
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