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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-06-18 05:07 AM



I hear it oh Lord, i hear,
your wonderful music of life,
playing loud and clear.

Your love rests nestled in my heart, so strong.
Let me add words to your music, to play our perfect song.

My life is rich and full
within your love, radiant and free.
If only others were the same and see the power of love in thee.

Everywhere i look, your work, your hand has touched all that i see.
Come fill my heart, pride of you and all that you do, will forever be in me.

''Death where is thy sting? Love where is thy glory?'' William Shakespeare.

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Kevo
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1 posted 2004-06-18 05:10 AM


Yes, the beginning and the end of inspiration.  You have done well to continue the homage to the most inspiring being of all.  Incredibly well developed.  It just rolls out like a river.  I enjoyed it.

Kevin

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2004-06-18 05:17 AM


Thank you Kevin...your reply is apppreciated...

Goldenrose.

''Death where is thy sting? Love where is thy glory?'' William Shakespeare.

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