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seeing is believing |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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I found a light-brown leaf that had its edges folded inwards On hindsight, I guess most people would have associated it with a quill But I saw a sealed filter funnel in my hands, a funnel that had dark holes on its sides A mockery of my life, it seemed, as it signified my feeble attempts to store-trap favorable memories A wry smile to myself, I congratulated myself on my distinctive mind frame that allowed me to see something unapparent to other eyes The silver lining of being melancholy [This message has been edited by kaile (06-18-2004 08:47 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wish I had written that! Bravo!  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah my friend - haven't read you in ages, and this was definitely worth the read. Well done. Last line caught me by surprise and that doesn't often happen. Good write... jimmy |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
I have missed reading you....this one makes up for it. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
kaile A good read, enjoyed. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanks guys for the comments. wasn't too sure about this one. your comments made me breathe a little easier...  Joanna, i miss your haikus too! have you been writing? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 absoul.utely superb!kaile, you have a wonderfully unique POV that ALWAYS intrigues and delights. I'll keep this one safe in my library.  |
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