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Narrowing Space
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Narrowing Space |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
It leads to this... The constant pull of narrowing space that draws us to this moment. As if we belonged here all along. And the distance kept was only dreamed to tease the senses. It leads to this. As our dreams fall to narrowing space...and this moment draws us even closer. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nicely done Ericc. Enjoyed. Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful as always Eric!! Well done! Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You write the most lucious poetry, such a romantic heart. I do so enjoy reading your work. SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
These words put view to that enthrall, that perfect pain of missing someone...only to suddenly look up and see your reflection in their eyes. Well done. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You are so good at the leading poems -- that's what I'm going to call them, okay. You lead us through an experience.  ....jo |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
So very beautiful. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
narrowing to the perfect point! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
closer yes |
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