Open Poetry #32 |
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I'm No Edgar Allen Poe |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light ![]() |
Crumpled paper on the floor, Waste basket brimming full, My brain can't storm anything, And half I write is bull. Ideas come ~ then fly away, I wonder where they go! I wish they'd stay, so I could write, ~ At least one little mot! A sheet of white, glares at me, Just daring me to write, But wisdom pearls, come not at all, Tho' I try with all my might! Perhaps I'm trying way too hard, To be Edgar Allen Poe, So I'll put the pen, back in my hand, And let the blue ink flow! [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-17-2004 09:17 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Atta Girl! I'm thinking you're an Allen... ![]() [and don't you dare read alien...] ![]() |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes, yes, we must be who we in essence our and find our own words. You do beautifully sweet angel. ![]() btw, did you see my attempt at senryu, inspired by you, you know. The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sunshine ~ Well, my Twin Soul IS an "Alan"! lol So I suppose you are correct! lol ![]() Thanks for your fun response! Warm hugs 'n smiles, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan, I just now read your lovely senryu that was inspired by me! I am honoured! ~ amd I am saving it! ![]() You are such a wonderful addition to our poetic family! ~ and in so many ways! Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You have a voice that's all your own So what if you're no Poe? Instead of writing tell-tale heart A caring one you show! While you could moan of midnight dreary You beam an angel's light And hasten to support a friend, Helping to make things right. You are yourself - and how we love Your tapping on PIP's door With talent and compassion We need this, and nothing more. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yeah, leave the Poe to others....you would not fit well in the pit as the pendulum swung overhead..... Nor would you and that pesky little Raven get along very well.....My understanding is ravens don't like angels very much.... I think your quill is sharp and ready to rock at most any second!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I rarely read Poe...and I mean rarely...but I often read you...who needs a midnight dreary...James |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
And in the very act of surrender...the gift of your words is born. Thank you. Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Why would you pen fence with Poe? He was no angel you know. He sailed a ship on the sea of weary And kept him a log of dreary. You my dear ar a delight In all you do and all you write. ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Belle of the South ~ You are an absolute Dear! You surely must realize that this touching, poetic response is a must-save! ![]() ![]() Right now I am grinning from wing tip to wing tip! lol I may look ridiculous ~ but I'm happy! Thank you for this, my friend! You just added to the sweetness of my day! ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry, you be one who could fence quills with Poe! ~ and win! I am such a big fan of your Poeish writes! They be dark and dreary ~ and can send little shivers throughout my vestments! lol ![]() What a kind and thoughtful reply you wrote! Thank you very much! Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
James ~ Yes, that is true! You do read most of my poems (more than you do Poe's! lol)so I suppose I must have been doing something write! I mean "right"! ![]() Aloha hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eric ~ Hmm! Yes, I see what you mean! A poem was actually born when I just let go and let the blue ink flow! ![]() Big hug, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ A second poem by you for me in one day! Well I most humbly curtsey before you with my utmost gratitude and appreciation! ![]() I am saving this lovely poetic response in my secret trove of poetic treasures from my PiP friends! I received some pretty distressing news about a loved one today and somehow I know everything is going to be just fine. I think my angels prodded all you Pip angels to write things that would perk me up ~ and you did! ~ and you, Sir T, did it two times over! ![]() ![]() EA |
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