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marcel
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0 posted 2004-06-16 12:15 PM



Tell Me Again

Will you tell me that story again?
The one that makes me search and not give up;
The story that makes me patient
And gives me purpose and reason…
I want to hear the story again,
So I will know when it happens.

Tell me again how you met…
I love the vivid descriptions of that first time,
When you spotted her across the crowd
And time you said stood still, like no one else existed;
It was the first time you heard your heart beat,
And the last time your heart said “yes”.

Describe to me the “kiss”
The kiss that made your heart dance---
I can only imagine how it swirled and swirled
Like a ballerina pirouetting on sweet ice,
Sort of like chocolate and vanilla ice cream
Only sweeter and tastier to the palate.

How about that laugh,
Please let me hear it again,
I know it embarrasses you, but it tickles my soul
To hear that silly giggle or that hearty expelling of joy
That you two so often shared.

I know I am not quite experienced enough,
But can you again share that intimate portion,
Of that first special moment…
Your word was “fantasticorgasmicpassionatelovemaking”
That cracks me up---
Because your eyes close when you reminisce
And you seem to be at that moment once again.
Ok, we will move on…”fantasticorg…” ha-ha

I know it hurts
But tell me again how your tears will never end,
How like a rainfall they will drop forever
And how brightly they glisten in the eve,
Like Heaven’s lights trapped in crystals---
Tell me…
I promise not to cry again,
Tell me again how there will never be another,
Tell me again how you fell in love.

Marcel



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1 posted 2004-06-16 02:04 AM


quote:
Your word was “fantasticorgasmicpassionatelovemaking”
That cracks me up---
Because your eyes close when you reminisce
And you seem to be at that moment once again


yes! what a wonderful love word

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2 posted 2004-06-16 02:54 AM


sometimes we need to hear things again
to keep us alive and breathing

good write here

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