Open Poetry #32 |
Love's Neverending Story |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Jim Warren * * * We lay down amongst the lupins High above the windswept shore We know this place so well We've been here many times before I am on top of the world Safe and warm in your embrace I watch a smile appear As I reach up and touch your face We search the far horizons As we gaze across the sea Your love fills my inner being And you become a part of me When I'm with you I'm complete And I see love in all its glory As we indulge in the next chapter Of love's neverending story I am in motion |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
I am still searching for such a love---Your sweet words and passionate verses give me hope........ |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
loved the pic! and also your happily ever after love shines thru. Definately written from heart experience. pictureme :-) |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Suetang, This is so sweet, happy, and refreshing! Sadelite |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is beautiful poetry! Excellent art work too. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I absolutely adore your romantic writes, Sensuous Sue! You should write a Harlequin Romance novel! To love & romance, Linda |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sue - you write of love like no other - it is only someone who knows it so well that can write it so well - loved this Paul |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hi Sue T. you are doing very well with your poetry and your imagery. Envious might be the word...Keep growing, your limit is somewhere beyond the stars... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You are still overflowing with captivating passionspeak, neverending I pray. Hugs to you dear lady. Love, Reg |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
marcel - I wish you well in your quest for love and thank you for reading my words. pictureme - Thank you for your lovely words. Sadelite - I am glad you liked my words. JL - Thank you so very much. Linda - You always humble me greatly. Paul - It's nice to see you and your kind words. Barry - You honour me with your gracious words for which I am truly humbled. Regina - How lovely to see you again and I thank you for your heartfelt comment. I hope all is well in your life. Take care..........Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Sue: Very beautiful and such a romantic setting too. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Betty Lou - thanks so much for your comment. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
your heart amazes me at times |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Realy great writing here Sue..i especially liked the ending....thank you for the great words... Goldenrose. ''Death where is thy sting? Love where is thy glory?'' William Shakespeare. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
wonderful piece of writing here Sue - of course I wouldn't expect any less of you. Much enjoyed the read . . . jwesley |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Dixie - I am always so grateful for your lovely words, thank you. Phil - It is so nice to see you and I thank you for your kind words. James - I am so very humbled by what you wrote, thank you. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sue, this is beautiful my friend and very much enjoyed, thank you for sharing. Sincerely Rick |
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