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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-06-15 04:04 AM


Yes...I Would

She's so sweet.
But as I get to know her,
will she turn sour?
For I have had my fill of promises
that never do come true.
But, if the words that
she says are soft and true.
"Yes...I would spend my life
with a woman as sweet as you."

JamesLee
June15
2004


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1 posted 2004-06-15 11:06 AM


James, I hope this is the one  Nice thought, to find someone sweet and real, that stays that way.
Sandra

Kevo
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since 2004-06-02
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2 posted 2004-06-15 11:10 AM


Well written.  It's amazing what you can convey with so few words.  I hope she is what you're looking for.  You write very well and I always appreciate reading your work.

Kevin

Startime55
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3 posted 2004-06-15 12:07 PM


Grab life by the horn looking at the glass as half full...I pray your dream comes true...

LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-06-15 12:33 PM


you never know unless you try...adding, I believe all us single folk have had our fair share, perhaps a canvas in the making?  Yes?


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-06-15 12:40 PM


Ah James..I hope she is the right one for you too.
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-06-15 01:01 PM


sweet!
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