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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2004-04-20 10:47 AM

My Robber Baron

You stole my shy glance,
tucking it behind your wink;

you thought it would be
enough.

Time traveled.

You stole my caress
by listening to whispers

which warm you well in
shadows.

Moments measured.

You stole my laughter
by giving sanity to mirth;

perceiving its song in your
ears.

Instants trek.

Then, all things carefully
considered,

you stole
a kiss,

embracing my keep in your
hands.

I sentence you, to my life.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-04-20 11:03 AM

"Then, all things carefully
considered,

you stole
a kiss,

embracing my keep in your
hands.

I sentence you, to my life."

Ah Soleil, yes, it usually starts with a wink, then a very slight touch, glances and whispers and then....ooooh then...the stolen kiss.

Yes, I know...I have been there too.

Lovely this...lovely you.
You have been missed..please stay longer..
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2004-04-20 11:07 AM

Beautiful...simply beautiful. Yes, it's like that.

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-04-20 01:37 PM

*smiling* very much...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-04-20 02:02 PM

Soleil Noir
Excellent, enjoyed.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-04-20 02:04 PM

Great write! Too cool!
JL

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-04-20 04:54 PM

Heh heh.....came back for another look see.
Gawd I love the way you write..teach me?

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2004-04-20 04:58 PM

I sentence you, to my life.

I just love that last line and I love the whole poem too.

Excellent Soleil

Maree

Have you any dreams you'd like to sell?

Stevie Nicks

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2004-04-20 05:01 PM

So your muse is a thief of hearts??
lovely poetess Sol...had a feeling youd come back with spring fever.. lol

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2004-04-20 09:31 PM

Soleil

Hello, my friend. I've missed you!

"embracing my keep in your
hands.

I sentence you, to my life."

What a fabulous ending!

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

10 posted 2004-04-21 10:36 AM

No words could be more charming than these. So very suggestive yet guarded. Well done! KJ

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

11 posted 2004-04-21 10:40 AM

LOL....love the ending particularly..this is good, "different" kinda write

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